The video is understandable, but the fluency is not very strong.The narration feels slow, and the background music is too loud, which affects the flow. Lowering the music would make the speech clearer and more fluent.
I think this video is very good the only thing that is holding it back is some weakly pronounced parts and some speech stumbles across the video. In the context of history programs it does everything excellently including cause and effect, visual reconstructions and chronological structure.
The topic you chose is relevant and engaging. I found the tone of speech you used for the history video appropriate and well-placed. Overall, it was a successful video, and I also liked how you enriched it with visuals.
The video is understandable, but the fluency is not very strong.The narration feels slow, and the background music is too loud, which affects the flow. Lowering the music would make the speech clearer and more fluent.
ReplyDeleteI think this video is very good the only thing that is holding it back is some weakly pronounced parts and some speech stumbles across the video. In the context of history programs it does everything excellently including cause and effect, visual reconstructions and chronological structure.
ReplyDeleteThe topic you chose is relevant and engaging. I found the tone of speech you used for the history video appropriate and well-placed. Overall, it was a successful video, and I also liked how you enriched it with visuals.
ReplyDeleteThe divison of work is amazing and the topic chosen is intriguing. Love it. Great work
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