Fashion Video Link
https://youtu.be/Luxk48vnTso?si=ApKWB06FMvCWKZTy
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Esra Aktaş - 252017027
Merve Yüksel - 252017035
Travel video
https://youtu.be/nKbtP4ytAl8?si=j8wdXJlzbHEPBUw2 Nur ibrahim 252017061 Doğukan Demir 252017055 Gülistan Krmızgül 252017033
Your word choice is strong and fits the fashion context well, especially the use of terms like “sleek,” “structured,” and “monochrome.” However, some parts of the conversation feel a bit disconnected, and the overall flow could be smoother. The fashion theme is clear, but the delivery would be stronger with more precise transitions . With a bit more cohesion, the interview could match a more polished fashion-show vibe.
ReplyDeleteAt first, I must say i dont have any knowledge of fashion shows or anything that has anything to do with those.However, i have the ability to imagine and estimate at least , so i think and i can tell that what you guys did ,if not exactly a fashion show, is quite close to how it should be.
ReplyDeleteThe interview and conversational format of the video was very informative. I really liked that you conducted separate interviews with the designer and the model. The adjectives you used during the presentation especially caught my attention—you chose excellent terms. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThe introduction is quite good, and the use of fashion-related terms adds interest. However, the speech could have been a little more sincere, rather than just a plain text.
ReplyDeleteThe words used and the outfits really fit the topic of fashion. I love how words such as monochrome, retro and so on was used. Overall the video was amazing everybody seems to do their part amazingly
ReplyDeleteI loved the engaging interview format and the overall presentation of this video. Your vocabulary is truly excellent, which instantly give the content a professional and high-fashion feel. Conducting separate, informative interviews with both the designer and model was a great idea. Fantastic job by the entire team!
ReplyDeleteThe video presents the fashion concept clearly and professionally. I really liked the strong vocabulary and the interview format, which made the content engaging. Overall, it feels well prepared and suitable for a fashion-focused presentation.
ReplyDeleteThis fashion video effectively presents fashion with clear visuals and confident narration. The language is simple and engaging, making the content easy to follow. Overall, it is a well-structured and good example of the fashion video genre.
ReplyDeleteYou narrated your clothings quite nicely while supporting it with visuals. I like the interview style as it made the video more interesting. I like the defining phrases like "retro vibes" and overall usage of vocabulary was really good.
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