Online Children's Book- The Guraffalo
YT LINK :
https://youtu.be/iMsrT4WZHdM?feature=shared
Sude Atabay- 222017043
Oğuzhan Özkale- 252017039
Metehan Çelik- 252017031
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https://youtu.be/nKbtP4ytAl8?si=j8wdXJlzbHEPBUw2 Nur ibrahim 252017061 Doğukan Demir 252017055 Gülistan Krmızgül 252017033
It is a very nice reading of "The Gruffalo." The pictures are clear and easy to see on the screen. The best part is the acting because you use different voices for the mouse, fox, owl, and snake, which makes the story interesting to listen to. However, to make the video even better, you should try to fix the sound; some parts are too quiet and others are too loud, and the special voice for the Gruffalo is sometimes hard to understand. Also, please make sure the text stays on the screen longer so slow readers can follow the story easily.
ReplyDeleteYour performance of voicing each character in a different tone was very good, and you also chose voices that suited you well. Oğuzhan’s voicing of the mouse, Metehan’s of the Gruffalo, and Sude’s narration were all spot-on choices. I truly enjoyed watching the video, and the sound effects were also used effectively. The book you selected was quite interesting as well.
ReplyDeleteThe voicing and toning were quite decent and were how it is supposed to be. No more to add , it was really nice to watch and listen.
ReplyDeleteVoicing and toning of each character was very good,acting as a those animals were quite brilliant idea besides our friends performance,i really enjoyed “The Guraffalo” as well
ReplyDeleteA background music could be used in a low tone to keep attention alive. Slowly saying the words, making descriptions, using different adjectives, and repeating words Increases interest .It was a good book to listen to
ReplyDeleteI like the voice acting made for each character as it enchanced the already interesting story. I couldn't find any significant mistakes so this is just a well done project. I think a child can listen this video, get invested in and understand what is happening.
ReplyDeleteThe voice changes of the characters while speaking during the dialogue are very well rather than a slow, fairytale-like narrative, it is a much more lively narrative. I think thats not a deal. But the background is too quiet. A quieter music could have been used (like a piano sound) in overall the video is good.
ReplyDeleteI really like the voicing for each character. The voicing makes the story more interesting to listen. One advice to make the video better would be to fix the sound and keep the voice level stable.
ReplyDeleteThe pronunciation and emphasis were really good, making it easy for children to understand and keep them engaging. The animations and the voicing of the characters matched the story perfectly and made it even more enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteThe way the characters were voiced and the tone of voice is great. The choosing of the book is and the clarity is awesome
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the character voicing and dramatic tone changes. My only suggestion for improvement would be to stabilize the overall audio balance; some sections were a bit low. Overall, a very well-executed and engaging performance.
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